Plumtree

Hannah - well done for getting the video on the blog after all the problems you had early on.

Positives:

• I think the locations work really well and the editing between them is very effective.
• Shot transitions are good and the layering of images is a nice touch
• The video really fits in with your artist, genre and the song.

Areas for improvement:

• Just some of the lip-synching - look at 1:01, 1:32, 2:25 and 2:39. The last one is just where you have tried to combine lots of images as the song builds to a chorus but the artist is saying more words than the repeated phrase you are trying to lip-synch. Most of it is really accurate and this is what makes these few moments stand out.

Have another look and see what you can do.